Sunday, September 14, 2008

I'M Sorry Comments

Rating: 4.0

I'm sorry my only son
for all the things I've done
I've tried to teach you right
but I've only taught you wrong
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Brittany Hafer
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2009

unsaid things absorbed in four lines dr

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Darkness Everywhere 06 February 2009

that really good i really like it. it has a lot of feeling in it. is it to do with your life? keep writing its so good

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 05 December 2008

your poems are always sweet and cute.really nice and full of feelings.......

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Yaseen Anwer 09 October 2008

Beautiful construction a powerful stroke by pen keep going.....

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James Riviera 24 September 2008

i think its shortness makes it just that much more meaningful.

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 23 September 2008

That's short and sweet.

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