Thursday, November 13, 2014

I'M Sorry! Comments

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I'm sorry for causing you so much pain
making your eyes drip like rain
I'm sorry for giving you hope
As I couldn't cope.
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Alice Cordy
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Chinedu Dike 19 February 2015

A heartfelt apology written with humility and sense of duty. I like the rhyme scheme of the poem. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.

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James Cordy 14 November 2014

You write so beautifully Alice and put everything out there for the world to see, I hope if the person this is for dosen`t think it`s meant for me, LOLA your BUD

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Lyn Paul 14 November 2014

It is a terrible feeling that eats at you when you believe you have hurt someone. Yet I do believe that overall the worrying that we do is way more then what the friend is hurting. Give yourself a big smile Alice for your big heart.

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Lenny Gazbowski 13 November 2014

How many of us can empathize with these words? Many I would say! Nice write!

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