'I'M Sorry' Comments

great poem.. the repeat of the of the words 'I'm sorry' gives this poem a musical effect and i really enjoyed reading this poem. keep it up! ! !

great work harley! The repitition, like Greenwolfe said, was excellent and made me feel as if you really wanted to tell everyone your sorry. Expression was great, and i could see if the sadness pouring the words, as usual, excellent job!

I liked this as well. Repetition is a good thing in poetry or any writing that needs to be remembered. I would advise everyone to read a poem of mine called 'Sorry' because it takes a different view of this word, but this is just fine. GW62

one word....awesome. i love it. excellent job. two thumbs up.