Sunday, February 3, 2008

I'M Sorry Comments

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I'm sorry that I care,
I'm sorry that I wanted you,
I'm sorry that I'm now to you, air,
I'm sorry that you had to care too.
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Aaron Combs 03 February 2008

alright.. well some of it's bit unruly? ? i guess you can say.. like definite forced rhyme.. but it's really good overall, could you comment my poems if you will thanks..

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