Tuesday, March 20, 2018

I'm Smoking; Seeing Subconsciously Comments

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I'm smoking; seeing around subconsciously
A piece of fire is burning on my lips
Smoky flame is flying; smoke-hole is flying too up
Merged into the air; vanished
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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BRITTE NINAD 28 February 2021

A beautiful imaginative canvas of a poet// nicely described your feelings

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 December 2020

Smoking your life away by seeing the ways of mankind around you! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Carl Roussell 27 January 2019

It can be too easy not to see the pain the strangers are living with. A moving poem.

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