Wednesday, May 20, 2020

I'm Sleeping Life. Comments

Rating: 4.0

I like to write poetry, but...
Sometimes my thoughts run away from me
Sometimes like a butterfly
They're on my shoulder, whispering in my ear
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Suresh Kumar Ek 11 October 2020

The poetic struggle with butterfly wings beautiful

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L Milton Hankins 16 September 2020

This is an exceptionally interesting piece of writing. I felt as though a voice was crying out from a deep depression or, possibly, drunkenness. It is so heartfelt, so intense. Thanks for sharing this with everyone.

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MHK Kenj 16 June 2020

İmpressive! Check my poems on insta MHKpoetry. my poems are similar to yours

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bulent karaalioglu 27 May 2020

It was nice to witness the birth of this poem

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