I'm sitting here and you are sitting there,
You're telling me what's happened since we met,
And I am happy for I love to share
All aspects of your busy life. And yet -
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Great, love it, will add you and keep reading... thanks for sharing
What a beauty this is Mary my lovely....so touching to read...each line deeply felt...thank you for this loving share 10++
^_^ The longing getting tough..........and the tough getting pleasure! ! ! I love this drama of behaving.Marvellous writes Mary!
Your sitting there and i'm sitting here touching you with words, i hope you find my caresses soft to your fine sensibilities.
imagination is free to run, it takes us into there arms and allows us to linger there knowing there's nothing we rather do.We know our thoughts are only reflecting the loving hopes of our heart because whenever they wander, they always take us to the one we love..... God bless you always! Hugs, Rommel
.............................this is truly lovely Mary, thank you
Nothing is as grand as love that is returned. Great piece...I enjoyed it very much. Regards Pete
Your poem flowed very nicely and your emotions pored out. Excellent!
Oh, Mary, I felt like this so recently. I won't go into what's happened since then but your beautiful poem strikes a chord in me.
Really, Mary to tell u truth a superb poem reflecting reality found in friendship from distant apart, with lucidity and ingenuity
A sweet loving feeling comes from this poem Mary, I like it very much.--Melvina
I like it mary, write more about complex relationships. tnx
A masterly-woven portrait of one of the many complexities of relationships. Loved it.
This is a wonderful sonnet Mary. I like how you bring in the new direction of the narrative by line five. You seem to feel that this is the important aspect of the poem. A lovely write and, as ever, a skilled use of the form.
vivid images creep slowly to imagination as i read through. great work