I'M Sitting Here... Comments

vivid images creep slowly to imagination as i read through. great work

Great, love it, will add you and keep reading... thanks for sharing

What a beauty this is Mary my lovely....so touching to read...each line deeply felt...thank you for this loving share 10++

Sweet...nice to the thoughts and soul.

Lovely poem. Nice to read.

^_^ The longing getting tough..........and the tough getting pleasure! ! ! I love this drama of behaving.Marvellous writes Mary!

Had to add this one to my list of favourites Mary.

nice poem, nostalgic fragrance.

Your sitting there and i'm sitting here touching you with words, i hope you find my caresses soft to your fine sensibilities.

Mary- In my mind this is a perfect 10. -shannon

imagination is free to run, it takes us into there arms and allows us to linger there knowing there's nothing we rather do.We know our thoughts are only reflecting the loving hopes of our heart because whenever they wander, they always take us to the one we love..... God bless you always! Hugs, Rommel

.............................this is truly lovely Mary, thank you

Nothing is as grand as love that is returned. Great piece...I enjoyed it very much. Regards Pete

Your poem flowed very nicely and your emotions pored out. Excellent!

Oh, Mary, I felt like this so recently. I won't go into what's happened since then but your beautiful poem strikes a chord in me.

Really, Mary to tell u truth a superb poem reflecting reality found in friendship from distant apart, with lucidity and ingenuity

A sweet loving feeling comes from this poem Mary, I like it very much.--Melvina

I like it mary, write more about complex relationships. tnx

A masterly-woven portrait of one of the many complexities of relationships. Loved it.

This is a wonderful sonnet Mary. I like how you bring in the new direction of the narrative by line five. You seem to feel that this is the important aspect of the poem. A lovely write and, as ever, a skilled use of the form.