Saturday, August 5, 2006

I'M Sitting Here... Comments

Rating: 4.8

I'm sitting here and you are sitting there,
You're telling me what's happened since we met,
And I am happy for I love to share
All aspects of your busy life. And yet -
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Mary Spain
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David Beckham 01 August 2010

vivid images creep slowly to imagination as i read through. great work

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7he N0153 4nd 7he Fur9 07 January 2010

Great, love it, will add you and keep reading... thanks for sharing

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~ Jon London ~ 29 June 2009

What a beauty this is Mary my lovely....so touching to read...each line deeply felt...thank you for this loving share 10++

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Oluko George 18 February 2009

Sweet...nice to the thoughts and soul.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 October 2008

Lovely poem. Nice to read.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 October 2008

^_^ The longing getting tough..........and the tough getting pleasure! ! ! I love this drama of behaving.Marvellous writes Mary!

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Fay Slimm 07 September 2008

Had to add this one to my list of favourites Mary.

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Prasetya Utama 24 July 2008

nice poem, nostalgic fragrance.

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Paul Hamer 15 July 2008

Your sitting there and i'm sitting here touching you with words, i hope you find my caresses soft to your fine sensibilities.

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Shannon Wright 17 January 2008

Mary- In my mind this is a perfect 10. -shannon

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Rommel Filoteo 07 November 2007

imagination is free to run, it takes us into there arms and allows us to linger there knowing there's nothing we rather do.We know our thoughts are only reflecting the loving hopes of our heart because whenever they wander, they always take us to the one we love..... God bless you always! Hugs, Rommel

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Jerry Hughes 03 November 2007

.............................this is truly lovely Mary, thank you

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Elias Jones 30 October 2007

Nothing is as grand as love that is returned. Great piece...I enjoyed it very much. Regards Pete

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Ana Monnar 01 September 2007

Your poem flowed very nicely and your emotions pored out. Excellent!

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Gillian Prew 10 August 2007

Oh, Mary, I felt like this so recently. I won't go into what's happened since then but your beautiful poem strikes a chord in me.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 23 May 2007

Really, Mary to tell u truth a superb poem reflecting reality found in friendship from distant apart, with lucidity and ingenuity

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Melvina Germain 25 November 2006

A sweet loving feeling comes from this poem Mary, I like it very much.--Melvina

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Marvin Brato 18 September 2006

I like it mary, write more about complex relationships. tnx

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Gina Onyemaechi 05 August 2006

A masterly-woven portrait of one of the many complexities of relationships. Loved it.

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Joseph Daly 05 August 2006

This is a wonderful sonnet Mary. I like how you bring in the new direction of the narrative by line five. You seem to feel that this is the important aspect of the poem. A lovely write and, as ever, a skilled use of the form.

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