I'm Silent Poem by Nosheen Irfan

I'm Silent

Rating: 5.0


because I love you more than I can say
i'm wrapped in silence
of a sea under setting sun,
silence of a rainless desert
or perhaps the silence of weary time
words don't exist any more
as if language
died
when the waves of love rose
and tossed me
into a whirlwind
of dreams.

Tuesday, December 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The opening line is borrowed from a poem of Auden.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 18 December 2018

Silence is the best language of love, it speaks louder than anything else. An interesting and intelligent poem, Full marks.

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 December 2018

Aha! ! Such a beautiful composition. Love carries you to another world where silence speaks louder than words. Loved it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 December 2018

words don't exist any more as if language died when the waves of love rose and tossed me into a whirlwind of dreams.......touching and impressive expression. It is too much amusing due to juxtaposition of he opening line borrowed from a poem of Auden. A brilliant poem.10

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Nosheen Irfan 10 December 2018

Thank you sir

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Nadeem Ishaque 07 December 2018

Poignant imagery and brilliant juxtaposition of loss (language, silence of weary times) with love that is jubilant.

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Nosheen Irfan 10 December 2018

Thank you so much for kind comments

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 December 2018

Hi Nosheen, Love makes life so better, the world so beautiful: Because I love you, words don't exist any more as if language died “ Wonderful expression... A totally new experience.... A ton of 10s....

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Nosheen Irfan 10 December 2018

Thank you so much sir

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Lahore, Pakistan
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