Wednesday, July 2, 2008

I'M Sick And Tired Comments

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I'm sick and tired of being trained
To only love the things you’ve stained

I'm sick and tired of leaving behind
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Payyton Egerstaffer
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Keith Hendrickson 12 January 2009

top to bottom a great piece. i like the way it flows, not just how it rhymes but the way it all comes together. nice work

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Serenity Prayer 07 July 2008

i can sence your frustration and the tention and hurt you have in this poem. excellent. well done. great job girl. keep it up.

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
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