Sunday, June 26, 2011

I'M Responsible, I'M Sorry Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bright lights blind us,
tires screech across pavement.

You scream,
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Death's Shadow
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Nice poem. I liked it. It was written well with great texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Best regards Akmal

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