Saturday, November 10, 2007

I'M Only Missing You Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's like a piece of me is missing
When he's not around
Like a hole in my chest
Pouring to the ground
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Madison Riley
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Mel Atie 22 June 2009

yeah... really sad poem... it's so deep......

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L M 13 November 2007

Poems are a wonderful way of descretly telling a story...good start =)

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Thomas Brant 11 November 2007

Wow... That's deep...

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Jennifer Hartman 10 November 2007

Oh, so sad! This poem is versatile, because I think it would make a good song...the last four lines would be a great chorus

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