I'm only human; in soul, I wonder
About Nature and its display of feast:
Seasons unfolding, mysteries, thunder:
Lovely before my eyes they manifest!
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Very nice, we are created as a soul and a body, so we should of our souls as much as we care of our bodies. I liked it, thanks.
All of this and much more can you do when you dream of the mind....iip
You somehow mananged to depict the key aspects of the human experience using such delicate words! I really enjoyed reading your poem, and also I rated it a 10!