Tuesday, April 2, 2013

I'M Not Your Prisoner Comments

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Under your domain to thy i cried for safety.
U hold me caption with your powerful passion of dark love.
I felt lonely, though you stood beside me.
I gave you my heart, you isolate it from your heart
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Blessing Anastasia Abaka
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Ernest Makuakua 26 January 2016

You hold your saw Telling me to stay put I drew closer, inebriated quaver befall me, As you pull me back. Hold me as your prisoner, under your domain i cray. nice one sister keep writing and id like to invite you to read my piece LOVE CRIMINAL JUSTICE I liked your piece thank you

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 04 April 2013

beautifully written... and well composed also nice imagery... i liked it....keep writing....

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Vijay Sai R 02 April 2013

such a nice poem...beautiful expressions

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 02 April 2013

Ofcourse non...love is not a crime it exist 'tween the two of love of such kind other wise love got no limits/ A bold poem...freedom seeker.........Cage keeper will not bring the freedom

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Blessing Anastasia Abaka

Blessing Anastasia Abaka

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