Tuesday, October 16, 2012

I'M Not Perfect Comments

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You can punish me
I deserve to be
But try to see
In my heart, I weep
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John Onyeme
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Bri Edwards 15 September 2013

That am now a disgust in your view.........is there a word missing here? i like the poem quite a bit. enough to send it to MyPoemList. it reminds me of at least one of my wives.....the part: See my dearest, am not a perfect being That's the way I've always been I beg of you, am trying my best To make you happy has ever been my quest Though nothing I do pleases you Oh my dearest, how do I do? .....that is me speaking to my wife! well, at least it is something like i have 'thought' about her. of course, usually i would not think a woman's or a man's love is worth dying for. thanks for sharing.

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