Saturday, November 16, 2013

I'M Not Looking Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm not bothered by
How many points I get,
I'm not looking for
Hearts or stars or things
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John Carter Brown
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Valerie Dohren 24 November 2013

I love to read your rhymes John - keep writing them.

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Joseph Anderson 24 November 2013

Hi- my advice for you would be -keep writing. you are doing great

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Paul Brookes 22 November 2013

great poem well said 10/10

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Smoky Hoss 21 November 2013

Right-on John; very well put.

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Lorraine Colon 18 November 2013

I think you speak for a lot of us. That's the most satisfying part of writing - finding out what others think of our words. Good job, John.

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