I'M Not Invisible. Comments

So much truth in this.If we only stopped to think in a moment of quiet we could see so much more.Instead our foolish prejudices and lack of compassion act as a sheild against those that cry out for help.We had better wonder at times like these, about the day when we also will be judged for who we are and our foolish actions.Great Piece Love Duncan

the words must be heard by all the big shots that run things because the immense loneliness of poverty needs solace and a helping hand a fine poem

A very moving poem.You are a fine wordsmith. Keep up the good work. What you have to say has great value. Regards, Sandra Fowler