I'M Not His Doll Comments

I really like the imagery here, as it is very vivid...I enjoyed its feministic overtones. My automatic jukebox went off, too: 'Doll Parts' by Hole and 'Coin-Operated Boy'...so apparently my whole brain likes it. Good job!

Far more maudlin than I am apt to care for but it is construed adequately nonetheless.

Osh Kosh Bygosh! ! ! This is intense man....How you do it? ! Keep it up yo! :)

You are! But aren't we all?

haha I really like this one, good use of words baby! keep it up! ! !

1. this is probably my fave 2. why? ? cuz it created an amazing image of u as the doll of (i wont speak his name) 3. u really are a wunnerful writer 4. u do sound a tad crazy... but i love u anyhow 5. his loss 6. cornocopia is the like most freaken awesome word. the way u use that whole stanza just blows my mind away. 7. please read and comment on my poems! ! loves