I'm Not Happy Comments

O GOSHHH, the serpent laments his unhappiness through a venom coated piece.Lovely piece Meshack!

I really like this poem, it is very heartfelt. It makes me think more. Is your love away for a short while? A holiday perhaps, or is it for a life time? I may never know.

i loooove this, .. i feel you, every word you've written is very straight to the point..clearly came from the heart..you should write more.. :) thanks for sharing..10++

Good flow to this poem, feeling sad because you are away from your love, well penned, 10 Lynda xx

...away away fom ur beloved! ..beautiful ur lines shows how much you...trully appreciable....