Wednesday, October 4, 2017

I'm Not Dead [ For Jack Kerouac's Frustration ] Comments

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I'm not dead
'til I've stopped
Pounding shit
Out of me
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Richard Wlodarski
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Daniel Brick 09 October 2017

WOW! You succeeded - Whether this is an angry ghost or an angry human, the sheer violence stretches out and grab us in his mighty grip.

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Richard Wlodarski 20 October 2017

Daniel, when I see WOW from you, I am greatly flattered! And it means so much to me because I'm working on a book of poetry about Kerouac. Thank you so much for your very valuable feedback!

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Bri Edwards 09 October 2017

i wonder if he only had two things he had left to do before dying. yes, some anger and frustration is certainly hinted at here! ! bri ;)

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Richard Wlodarski 20 October 2017

A lot of anger and frustration, Bri! ! ! !

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