Words arranged outspokenly
Not jargonic
As such not accomplished as poem
No intricacy
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Very well written. Very meaningful! You have the flow! You made compositions! For me, a poem doesn't have to be a Japanese HAIKU or a Sonnet! It bears tastes on matters and issues. A poem can be a song also! You have the spirit and you are good! Keep it up! 10 for this poem! Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Mongal my dear Poet. Your comment will inspire me to write more. I also request you to go through my poems.
nice flow of words........a cute and lovely poem sir! the title itself is interesting.....you say that you are not a poet but this is very well written! :) ...nice reading it!