Monday, July 4, 2011

I'M My Father's Son Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once
when I was still a baby boy
obsessed, thrilled with dark night sky
father said, shut your eyes tightly
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Manuel Odeny
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 July 2011

Nice poem written with great skill and wisdom. The poem is rich in imagery. Well done. I rate it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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Mombasa. Kenya
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