Friday, August 1, 2008

I'M Lost In Your Sea Of Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

Falling fast and gaining speed
I don't know what is happening
It's never been like this before
I must be in a dream
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kendall cook
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Craig Anderson 01 August 2008

That could be a perfect description of your first parachute jump or poem. Whatever, it was a really nice piece. Regards, Craig.

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silver phoenix 01 August 2008

this is really beautiful.10/10! no better way to describe it If you have time please read some of my work too and rate it and/or comment it. Constructive criticism is welcome as well, offcourse. Thankyou and keep it up, Kilian

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