Sunday, April 6, 2008

***i'M Losing Me Comments

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She, the big girl, alone in the world, free
Walkin straight, thinking deep, talkin sensibly
A mature smile, for every victory, in place of a loud scream
Not neverland, but the future she tours in her dreams
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Sarvesh Kulkarni 23 October 2008

A wonderful poem, truly. The last stanza says it all. Thanks for sharing...

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K. V. Venkataramana 19 April 2008

'But with all her money, she cant travel to the fun part of life...' Beautiful poem with a nice imagery...

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