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this poem is definitely well written your really good writter u can write what your emotions are and i can tell in narrator's voice

This poem is definitely well written, you can really feel the emotion in the narrator's voice. It's kind of bittersweet, talking about the good memories but how it wouldn't work anyway.. It had a really good flow, I really enjoyed reading it!

Wow. great rhyming. kinda sad tho.

This is very good, Amber. I am a touch confused, because there is a mixed message of 'dont think about me' and 'dont forget me', but all in all, very good. Sort of bittersweet, for no reason other than loss is painful, but acceptance and closure is beautiful. I've written some new things, if you would like to have a look at them, that would be great :) keep writing.