Thursday, August 30, 2007

I’m Just Running Comments

Rating: 0.0

So cool so provoking wind blowing up my face
As if trying to wake me up
But I’m just running along with the train
Blinking and glaring outside not to find anyone
...
Read full text

Farooq Hussain
COMMENTS
W. D. Collis Bungay 23 March 2008

enjoyable, i like the imagery projected by the lines: 'just running along with the train' in the first stanza and last line, it gives the poem a great finish.

0 0 Reply
Farooq Hussain

Farooq Hussain

Hyderabad, India.
Close
Error Success