James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Thursday, May 21, 2009

I'M Just Like You When Blue Comments

Rating: 4.4

Without thinking, I can also turn and lash out
with my teeth sharp exposed, do you now, not get
this picture in full...right....now..i am just like you,
so low from hard up scenes, I wish..I were
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James McLain
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Ken E Hall 14 June 2009

A clever poem silent in the mind then wham it hits you with its cleverness, just like us all true blues +++10 regards uavaniceday

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Eyan Desir 12 June 2009

top marks good write

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Alexa Depaola 03 June 2009

this is pure excellence!

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Eyelizabeth Unknown 24 May 2009

breath-takingly beautiful *tear*

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Fiona Davidson 21 May 2009

Your poetry has such a poignant strand running through...absolutly beautiful...Fi 10+++

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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