Sunday, June 21, 2015

I'M Just A Guy Comments

Rating: 4.5

I'm just a guy
With my guy kinda ways
I live in a single room
With my own bathroom
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Raymond Farrell
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Bernard Snyder 21 June 2015

I liked this one a lot. I'm sure you will eventually clean it whenever you're good and ready! Thanks for sharing!

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Kelly Kurt 21 June 2015

I really liked this, Ray. I could imagine the mess (Your room is probably still a lot neater than mine.) : -) And I could sense your thought process. The last 9 lines were just the right way to end this piece. Keep up the good work.

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Kim Barney 21 June 2015

Ha! Sounds just like some people I knew back in college many years ago. Well written. I enjoyed reading it.

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Raymond Farrell

Raymond Farrell

Perth, Ontario
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