Sunday, October 18, 2009

I'M Just A Girl Comments

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I'm just a girl.
A girl who needs somebody.
A girl who cries out for help.
A girl who looses her temper.
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Karina Lopez
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Marc-daniel Paul 04 December 2009

Hi Karina, i think you're a very talented poet, but the problem i have with this one is that i think you value yourself less than you might really be. This is mostly seen in the seventh, eighth, and ninth verses. Everyone can achieve with a positive mind, and even though life can be tough sometimes, it's better to be alive because as long you can breathe, there's hope. You just need to believe. I think you're a great writer who just needs to realize that who you are is really who you want to be. You have the choice and no one is stopping you but yourself. remember that the next time you express yourself through writing....

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