Monday, February 16, 2009

I'M Incomplete Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m incomplete.
I know it’s true.
But I have my feet
To get to you.
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Alex waters
COMMENTS
Rory Hudson 28 February 2009

The rhythm is a bit off in parts. The ending leaves things hanging unresolved - of course, perhaps that's what you wanted.

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Barry A. Lanier 24 February 2009

I enjoyed the lpight and the intensity of the journey and I'm sure I missed out somewhere....but exactly what happened at the end? help me to understand you crescendo?

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Ernest Lee Clary 18 February 2009

what a quest for love- very good another ten

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Greenwolfe 1962 17 February 2009

This is a magnificent piece of work. What a poem! It shall be one of my favorites because it was presented masterfully. Great rhythm and rhyme. Something I rarely see. Tremendous story as well. A rarity indeed. I loved every bit of this. Wonderful! GW62

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