I’m incomplete.
I know it’s true.
But I have my feet
To get to you.
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I enjoyed the lpight and the intensity of the journey and I'm sure I missed out somewhere....but exactly what happened at the end? help me to understand you crescendo?
This is a magnificent piece of work. What a poem! It shall be one of my favorites because it was presented masterfully. Great rhythm and rhyme. Something I rarely see. Tremendous story as well. A rarity indeed. I loved every bit of this. Wonderful! GW62
The rhythm is a bit off in parts. The ending leaves things hanging unresolved - of course, perhaps that's what you wanted.