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Here in this world treading my lonely trail,
Falling, failing, in many a mistake,
Like a baker, try better breads to bake,
In market place I'm, never yet for sale;
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Aniruddha Pathak 07 November 2019

Thanks dear Kumarmaniji for visiting this poem of 2004, and liking it with your beautiful and encouraging feedback.

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 November 2019

Date & Time: 11/7/2019 12: 05: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 37557599 - I'm In This World Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Comment: Here in this world treading my lonely trail, Falling, failing, in many a mistake, Like a baker, try better breads to bake, In market place I'm, never yet for sale; My heart has tonnes of love for all who care, .......haunting expression with nice collocation. Brilliant beginning. Beautiful poem. I appreciate this poem. Thank you very much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2019

Here in this world treading my lonely trail, Falling, failing, in many a mistake, Like a baker, try better breads to bake, In market place I'm, never yet for sale; My heart has tonnes of love for all who care, .......haunting expression with nice collocation. Brilliant beginning. Beautiful poem. I appreciate this poem. Thank you very much.

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