Monday, December 8, 2008

'I'M In Love With You' Comments

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I'm in love with you,
I fell in love with you during a difficult situation.
I adore the brisk wind that lifts up off of the lake,
that pertrudes to my face.
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Sallie Marie Tompkins
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Rachel Butler 22 September 2009

Chicago, I'm in love with you. Can it be true that I, discovered a city as beautiful as you, Rachel Ann Butler

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 December 2008

Ahhh.....what a lovely love poem.........for a City.Chicago stands tall..........Long Tall Sallie is back! !

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Kesav Easwaran 09 December 2008

your poem really took the 'wind' out of me, Sallie...reading till its middle, i was thinking you were addressing there your soul mate...how wrong i was! a good and dedicated write on the city you love...impressive work 10

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Sallie Marie Tompkins

Sallie Marie Tompkins

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