I'M In Love With My Brother's Girl Comments

The poem is so deep, a choice between your love or the trust of your brother. Follow your heart, but know whatever choice you will make is not going to be easy, either way it is going to hurt. Nice one GP.

i like your poem its really good

very nice poem dear but then how to cheat on your brother i dunno difficult situation well for bringing out the story in a narrative form ill give you a 9/10

Honor is never self-serving. I hope this advise is not too late. Betrayal of honor will always bring regret to all involved. The poem is obviously heartfelt although, since it is in English, it does present some English grammatic challenges. Adeline

what do i have to say about myself, being in love with my brother's girl. what do you think i do about this. i'm perplex and helpless. i love this poem so much, it speaks something.