I'M Immortal Comments

Very interesting poem, brother! I like it a lot! Thanks for sharing. Also 'congrats!

I am immortal A demented Guilt-free child nice poem and congrats

To those who didn't get the point of this poem; the child I was talking about is 'A Good Book'. Just imagine any good book. it becomes immortalised like the message of the book. The Authors too, many times. An example is the Bible. If you didn't get what I said it means I am not good at conveying my message and I try to improve upon that. Thank you!

i like it really but i just don't get the immortality anyway you are artistic honestly i like puzzling poems

Wonderful...brother, nice poem, very well

Great poem again. Really like this one.