Saturday, August 29, 2020

I'm Good To Fly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't dismiss me with a wave
I'm not a lost soul you can't save.
My own horizons might be low
but I still have a way to go,
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Lodigiana Poetess
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Lodigiana Poetess 07 September 2020

Hi Shaun thanks you so much for your comments..I felt I needed to write something with more of a 'Blue Sky' effect and a smattering of positivity rather than the slightly grey poems of late. I an a great believer in life mantra as you say and would love to be able to live by it..although sometimes harder than we anticipate! ..but we will keep on trying. Stay well and safe my friend..Always. Lodigians x

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Shaun Cronick 05 September 2020

Good to fly and so graceful to soar. Lodigiana another poem of hope you deliver more than simply well. Reads like an anthem to instil confidence and a poetry gee up in any reader's mind. one of those poetry rarities like Desiderata a constructive positive game plan for life mantra. A full score but again it's not about the points Lodigiana. Just the words and what great words. And take care. Shaun.x.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 29 August 2020

Beautiful as usual. Umm... this one you could sing and people will love it. The structure the rhymes the ctach phrase to draw the reader/listener in. Lets hear it sung when you done.

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