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Again, Soran, I cannot tell if my replies are going to show ip in the reply box so just in case- -Soran, I am the one who needs to thank you! ! ! You are the type of reader that makes posting on PoemHunter so worthwhile: :
Soran, I cannot tell for the life of me if my replies to your graceful words are ever printed in the reply box- -so I shall also reply in comment box- Thank you, thank you, thank you! ! ! ! You get the presence behind the poem! ! ! ! That is so awesome to know there are people out there diving beneath the surface of my poems and finding it fruitful! ! ! And 10s and on your fav list- -my head is swelling as we speak! ! !
Part 1 Dear Susan, Hello and thanks, This is a smart strategy for an expert poet in order to deal with a short and fleeting life, it is true that it is a short poem but it is deep and has marvelous meanings, here in the end of the poem we discover some meaning of true eternity for mankind as it is begins
part2 Really it is a poignant piece of work. Very strong and powerfully penned from the wisdom mind and from the good conscience heart we always finding surprises when reading your poems, and we always feel thirsty to read more of them, well done 10/10 and onto my Fav list as usual
susan, my heart affirms the truth of " life is just a matter of being a beginner again." i think too that this is what humility is about. wishing the best for you, glen
Thank you and please take care of yourself out there- wear a mask, maintain social distancing, and wash your hands and face after being out and about!
An inspirational write to do because you can while you can.......well penned.
There will come a time when time will get the better of us... thank you for reading and commenting, Tom
Wow! This reminds me of the old song, 'Chains (of Love) .' We may believe that love is the goal, but do the chains keep us away from freedom? Sometimes, we have to step back, give the chains a rest, and, as you say, be 'a beginner all over again.' I can actually hear the Beatles doing a 'cover' of I'm Gonna to the tune of Chains. A perfect 10, Susan.
Thank you for getting into this poem! WoW! ! ! The Beatles, huh? ? ! ! Well, if I am going to dream, I might as well dream top-notch! ! ! Thank you for the 10 and it tickles me that you enjoyed this so well! ! ! ! !
you have galloped on horse back miles and miles and earned many a smiles as I wait about the corner in graveyards piles when will you again about my frame ride O poetess don't be wild I am still in the field waiting to be read SW by thee you are poetry for so many I can feel
you have galloped on horse back miles and miles and earned many a smiles as I wait about the corner in graveyards piles when will you again about my frame ride O poetess don't be wild I am still in the field still waiting to be read SW by thee
Untie the heart from the chains that bind it. Open it to accommodate others....! Break free of all shackles and begin over again to experience life with newer thrill. Bury the past and get ready to embrace a new morrow. This renewal is what makes life a novel experience full of hope and fresh energy! A lovely resolution and a lovely poem!
I love reading your comments- they are always so full of poetic wisdom. Thank you for taking such time and care in reading and commenting
Life is just a matter of being a beginner all over again You see I have hope for me. - - - - - - Very well said, dear Susan Williams.Hope you are healthy and fine.
I am doing very well- -staying home and gardening on my porch and visiting with the sparrows and finches. I hope you are doing very well indeed- you are a bright light here on PH as well as FB and in your country!
Hi Susan, Hope this finds you happy, healthy and safe. When you say you are going to begin, once again, i visualise it as a new journey, full of hope, full of cheer and a positive stride forward. A beautiful poem of a new freedom found........10
Hi, Geeta! ! I am well and trying to be safe! Hope you are happy, healthy and safe as well. And finding joy even in this time of huge stress. My memory is so poor that it's like a new world surrounds me every day! ! ! ! Seriously, I do believe in shaking it off and trying again- -tis one way to gain a bit of wisdom the hard way. Thank you for enjoying the read
Thumbs up for that. Life seems to demand that we change ourself again and again, start over again and again.
I agree. No matter how much we like our ruts and prefer being sticks in the mud, life just has to get all jittery and dodge this way and that and toss us off into the nearest brier patch! ! ! Thank you for the thumbs up! ! !
Good for you! I have hope for you too, A true poet of heart and vision Planting joy, never division Is someone who doesn't Give up, And really does carry thru. You show 'em, girl! Thanks for the good thoughts and encouragement. We wish you too, the same and the very best.
hey Sandra! ! ! Thank you for all the support you have given me through the years- -it certainly makes a difference! ! ! Stay safe and be cautious- you are needed by this world!
Wonderful poem, full of positive energy. Excellent write! Thanks for sharing, Susan.10+
I am glad you enjoyed the positivity! And thank you for the generous score!
Yeahh cool super poem, inspiring, hopeful and beautiful. Begin all over, way to go! Kudos. Take care, warm regards. Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest prose titled, ' miraculous birds witnessed in sacred sanctuary"
Thank you for your enthusiasm! ! ! I will try ti read your poem right now- tried to read one of Jez but couldn't get PH or my computer to get me there. Wish me luck!
Hey, Jez, am trying to stay safe... I hope you have not lost anyone to this horrid virus. My husband and I lost a friend to it- we are missing him but know he was a believer and is in good hands now. Stay safe as can be, Jez, you are well-loved on PH
I have hope for you, too, Susan. You always come through in the end. I was getting a little concerned about you because you hadn't posted for a while, but it's great to see you posting again!
Thank you, Kim, for missing me. I think that sounds a bit odd- but it means a lot to me that my friend noticed I am absent.... tis the book series I am writing- -I feel the need to get it done and to a literary agent. So I have funneled most of my time and effort into that. But I do miss my PH friends and the poetry that they are writing and I am missing out on.
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7/19/2025 12:18:40 AM # 1.0.0
Awesome motivational piece insightfully crafted with conviction. A beautiful love work of art.