Monday, March 24, 2008

I'M Gone Comments

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I feel my feet hit the ground,
with greater force as i pick up speed
running as fast as i can,
the wind blows my bright red hair around me,
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Amanda Miller 03 April 2008

This is really good.. i love the metaphor of your tears being the rain and your screams are the thunder

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