I'M Going To Be Someone Comments

You know you belong in the city of lights. They say to give up, you know you got to fight. thats true........finite! !

Its an understatement that this is a good poem..its full of emotions and hope. I like it..thumbs up to u!

Yes, very deep, and proud, wonderful write there The_African_Son

This poem has touched me like no other poem has. It is so full of emotion, I can feel them for myself. I also love how you have used the first words also as your last, as if you are showing that you believe them yourself. So beautifully written. Keep writing [3 Tiana xx

Very nicely written! I like how you used the first two lines to conclude as well, keep writing