Friday, January 30, 2015

~i'M Going Home~ Comments

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Forward, I go
Willing, waiting
For a smile
To show then walk away
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Valsa George 04 February 2015

The poem centres round a special mood of painful resignation! Ask me, what's wrong? Answer, what's right? Very poignant question and answer! The attempt to find out what is wrong leads to a more depressing question.... 'What is right'! This question and counter question contain within them a whole world of meaning!

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