Sunday, April 15, 2012

I'M For You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every now and then
You hammer my brain.
You ask for my identity;
And swear to follow me
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Ruby Mostazir 11 April 2013

nice poem....specially finishing 4 lines are excellent!

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Sun Shine 26 November 2012

(You will be my prize) ... feelings of strong faith are confidently expressed. :)

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 24 April 2012

'Sadly I'm Yours' poem very well crafted '...Promise, in the next birth/You will be my prize.'...finish is optimistic as true love never perishes Tenner Regards ~ niv PA Please comment on my poem 'Why Hack My She' n

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