I'M Flying Free Comments
Let the clouds sway with the wind,
Let there dance storm like Nataraja;
Let me uproot my soul, from its soil.
I cherish to fly from this fever,
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Thats the spirit... Take me away away from this world, where hatred has Medusa's head, loved these lines..
A very descriptive well written poem, I hope your soul will always fly free Nilakshi
the soul is eternally free of all shackles... it's an objective witness to all our thoughts, emotions... we think we should set it free but soul is always beyond us! i enjoyed reading the poem and it lightened me so much that i felt myself a floating cloud!
First i am sorry Nila, but i dont know what is Nataraja? ? Well this poem play with contras emotion, some dark side but the mission is to be free...well i dont think hate is useful in any condition, and trust is to be doubt....These two, love and trust are the most precious ingredients to prepare a magical potion in working communication and appreciation of relationship....or did i misunderstood the poem....LOL keep writing :) _Unwritten SOul
Great poem about the soul yearning to be fre e - you may like to read mine entitled Great Eagle with a similar theme.
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7/23/2025 11:38:54 AM # 1.0.0
Take me away away from this world.....this wonderful poem is flying like a kite...