Sunday, May 3, 2020

I'm Empty Now! Comments

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I'm empty now!
water driven from a cup
Dry as a copra husk.
I'm sinking now!
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keith brown
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A poignant write. Death is vividly depicted. Great imagery.

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Keith Brown 04 May 2020

Poems are strange things I had no idea where I was going when I penned the first line, I thought the muse was asleep and I was in fact empty, thanks very much for your comment if your like me your never really sure when you put the last full stop in, comments help

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