I`m Dying Slowly-My Desperate Plea Comments

a very nice point of viewing this earth. Great..

This poem really suprises me....its deep and interesting..Very well written and If spoke in words would be sooo amazing

this is an amazing poem its soo deep and real. i love it your amazing i would love to be able to write something that deep.

great poem......the first couple of lines give the impression its about a break-up but then you realise its actually about mother earth...

this really good poem i like it alot i feel like dying slowly

I like the rhythm of your poem. Also, its structure like a wide and straight road leads to the 'lover' person. And of course, the subject is very much actual. Very good writing!

Well-written...very fluent indeed.

Great twist ending. Alot of my stuff has twists, too, but this a better one than any of mine, I think.8/10

Fluent verses concerning the pollution and other environmental problems. Thanks for sharing.

this poem is amazing i loved it a lot your a really good poet keet up the good poem hope to read more from yuou

And that's it in the end...the planet earth...good And to your message...i wouldn't have enjoyed you slowly dying for sure...but i enjoyed your poem..lively...10

This sounded to me as a lover`s plea, I admit, I did not get it until the end. With it read in its entirety, I hear a strong voice speaking in proxy for mother earth. Meaningfull and direct was your message and I appreciate it.

I like your poem. It's fantastic. Well, you are really good in this. It is really touching.

reminds me of a love poem written by a ex. 'Even though you hurt me, I you forgive I am the only reason that you live'

I like the peice in here when u talk about u gave birth to many beautiful things but they bring pain i agree a whole lot!

I really enjoyed reading this, nicely done :)

That was very well written! Your rhyme scheme is about the same as mine, but great job: ]

Thanks. Your expression is really very good. Its full of feelings. I do not like to say anything about spellings and selection of words. I shall read more in future.

one word beautiful, i love this one. well written, keep it up