I'M Drowning Comments

Good poem, you are getting better all the time. Read mine - The Cat Is Free - May I suggest that you write a series of poems on animals. I sense that you would be good at it. Adeline

Woow I'm impressed with your writes. That's really amazing! Keep up the good work :)

I hope it was just a bad dream and later you woke up to be welcomed by a beautiful and bright day! This write is absolutely great by any mean! Your talent filtered through this amazing write! WELCOME to the Poetry World! This is just the beginning of a long journey! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

This poem is beautiful! Very vivid imagery, phenomenal poem. :)