Monday, February 9, 2009

I'm Down By The River Comments

Rating: 4.8

I'm down by the river a feeling so peaceful
To gaze at the water that slowly flows by,
Whilst heading downstream on a tide of emotion
It mirrors the sight of the beautiful sky,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Ernestine Northover 23 February 2009

What a picture you have created here Andrew, a gentle breeze of a poem that washes over you so delightfully. How I enjoy your works. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Ramesh T A 22 February 2009

Your poem is not just a static picture; it is a moving and lively picture you have painted with your poetic pen! It will be listed under the category - Immortal Poem!

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Vaibhav Pandey 20 February 2009

I fully agree with kesav sir.....a great descriptive poem....your work is consistent which is the best thing about you.

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What can I say? Once again such a gorgeous write, entrancing me from the first word to the very last. We are in drought, our Torrens River through our city muddy and sad. I shall pretend I am where your river is and ride on the beauty of our words all day and night! Karin Anderson

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Tsira Goge 10 February 2009

Fine a sunset, and beautiful expectation of stars... 10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Lynda Robson 09 February 2009

Your poetry is a joy to read Andrew, I always feel as though I too am looking through your eyes, wonderful imagery and flow, thank you, 10 Lynda xx

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ANDREW BLAKEMORE

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