I'm down by the river a feeling so peaceful
To gaze at the water that slowly flows by,
Whilst heading downstream on a tide of emotion
It mirrors the sight of the beautiful sky,
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Your poem is not just a static picture; it is a moving and lively picture you have painted with your poetic pen! It will be listed under the category - Immortal Poem!
I fully agree with kesav sir.....a great descriptive poem....your work is consistent which is the best thing about you.
What can I say? Once again such a gorgeous write, entrancing me from the first word to the very last. We are in drought, our Torrens River through our city muddy and sad. I shall pretend I am where your river is and ride on the beauty of our words all day and night! Karin Anderson
Fine a sunset, and beautiful expectation of stars... 10... Best wishes, Tsira
Your poetry is a joy to read Andrew, I always feel as though I too am looking through your eyes, wonderful imagery and flow, thank you, 10 Lynda xx
What a picture you have created here Andrew, a gentle breeze of a poem that washes over you so delightfully. How I enjoy your works. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX