Thursday, November 13, 2014

I'M Dead I'M Gone Comments

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Insecurities lining up at the door,
Digging deep into my core,
Putting the monster inside my head,
Not letting me go to bed,
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Theresa Short
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Fabrizio Frosini 08 January 2015

for a good deal of us, poetry is easier to express when we experience sadness. I'm one.. Thanks for sharing, Theresa

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Hans Vr 13 November 2014

Very poetic expression of your depressed feelings. The strength of this poem lies in a poetess seeming to give some space to the depression.While media want to make us believe that life is supposed an all happy event, it is not. I do not know much how to deal with sadness but still I feel so often that sad is not bad, it is not good either, just a normal human feeling. If I get stressed and pressured about it, it tends to get stuck. If I just accept it to be there transiently, it gets some space to move and moving it does. Great piece of poetry here

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