Wednesday, February 20, 2008

I’m Coming Home Comments

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I listen to the train whistle blowing
as it disappears down the track.
I would have been on it
and not coming back,
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David Harris
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JoAnn McGrath 20 February 2008

were you listening to Willie Nelson when you wrote this: O) ....no seriously though...this is a deep thought out message here and well written

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Thad Wilk 20 February 2008

Very good write David! ! ! Thank U for sharing! ! *10*! ! Best regards : : Friend Thad

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C.R. Clark 20 February 2008

Very nice read. Many, I think, have been sorely disappointed by not taking stock of what they were giving up before making hasty choices. Thanks Richard

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This rings bells. I am not sure whether or not they are alarm bells. Either way it is a painfully elegantly written piece. t x

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David Harris

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