Saturday, October 5, 2013

I'M But An Autumn Leaf Comments

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I’m but an Autumn Leaf
Lying on the ground with winds I play
And oft stirred by a squirrel’s feet
Once crowning glory now lost and sway
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Yasmin Khan
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Geetima Baruah Sarma 04 November 2013

A comparison well-crafted.

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 17 October 2013

indeed a very touching poem. nature symbols that reflected life...

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Roseann Shawiak 15 October 2013

Loved your comparison of man to autumn leaves. Nature and man always seem comparable in poetry, I think. Very good poem, like it a lot. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Mary Forrester 15 October 2013

A lovely poem Jasmine, enjoyed the read.

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Sallam Yassin 07 October 2013

from dust we came and our fate in dusk To end is to fade in dusk/all

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 07 October 2013

we are all fated once to fall on the ground. lovely metaphor!

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Valsa George 06 October 2013

We are all autumn leaves producing music in raspy sound when crushed under foot or flown about by puffs of wind, waiting to be disintegrated with the soil! Apt comparison!

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Dave Walker 05 October 2013

A great poem on nature and life, like it.

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Shraddha The Poetess 05 October 2013

a very beautiful poem i can say.............! ! ! also invite u to read mine..... thnx...

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