Saturday, September 12, 2020

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Look for that special connection.
Please forgive me if I say you just don't fit.
It's not something you did or didn't.
My heart is just so fickle, so hard to satisfy.
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Ace Of Black Hearts
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Ace Of Black Hearts 12 September 2020

You're not wrong, but they're interconnected. The one reminds me of the other. Sorry if I confused you.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 12 September 2020

Its heart rending poem. I just get a bit confused though. It starts being a lovers lament then a sisters regret. I reckon there are two poems in this one. Ignore if i am wrong.

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