Tuesday, June 24, 2008
I'M Better Than This Comments
Rating: ★3.5
I dont deserve to be used,
My hopes, my fears, you chose to abuse,
I dont deserve the way things are,
I could sit all night in this bar,
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Sam Fischer
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Liz Thaugally
07 July 2008
Uplifting, inspiring, I love the last line: 'I walk away into a brighter sun' Well Done Luke, Keep writing! Lizelah
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7/26/2025 2:47:52 PM # 1.0.0
This is well and honestly written Luke. A sad and dark piece but ultimately ending with a hopeful and positive last line..... Very good and do keep your talent to the front because you write well.