I'm Beat Poem by Jennifer Birchall

I'm Beat

Rating: 3.5


I thought I was strong
Everyone said I was, was I?
So why have I let this beat me
Ground me down to nothing
I have give my everything
But I am so tired and weak
I have no energy to win this fight

Thursday, July 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amir Marandi 12 July 2019

Doubt, you should not have to have. Emotional and right to the point. You are stronger than what you have perceive to be.

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Sekharan Pookkat 11 July 2019

strong enough to win enjoy the power a winner and se your mind ready, go.......

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Julia Luber 11 July 2019

Concise and astute; we all get tired sometimes. Sounds like you are simply taking a rest…keep up the good fight!

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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